A line: a casual line,
or two maybe;
don't necessarily make a Haiku!
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Erupting volcano, ferocious lightening
relentless rains.
My unquenched anger.
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Never-ending traffic,
overcrowding of thoughts;
can't find a way out.
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Crude beauty of the nature;
Sleek futuristic cars; alas!
I find only materialistic metaphors.
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Zen.
Spotless mind;
Not the car.
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3 comments:
Nice lines!!!
Hi there,
do you know the India Saijiki for Haiku ?
And soon there is a World Haiku Festival in India, February 23 to 25, 2008 Bangalore !
More information
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/worldhaikufestival2008/
INDIA SAIJIKI
. World Kigo Database .
All the best from
GABI in Japan
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the Zen haiku was brilliant :-)
--ameya
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